Er...my name..VASANTH..evalo azhagaana peru...till school i stayed unique..like only very few people in the whole school were named VASANTH..i was real happy..but O.M.G...i am in college
n guess how many vasanths in my class!!..freakin 4!!..4!!..n if u include the first yr guy in mech there are 5 in total...i was so taken aback..wateva..the point is i hav LOST MY IDENTITY..so i blame below..
These days just seem so long,
Even for the big and strong,
My life is down like a pile of trash,
It takes some time to clear this bash,
Loneliness creeps all over me,
Making me lose my identity,
Stopping my dance of sanity,
Hell is booming my clarity..
I have lost myself,
In the deep dark woods,
No one to hear me out,
To see me through to the end,
I have lost myself,
Now im crying out loud,
I have lost myself,
Lost myself..
All the pain groomin inside me,
Waitin to blast out at the sea,
All the crap misery within me,
Loomin for a lowly chance to reap,
Reap into something,
A monster in the mournin,
Suicide does seem so sweet,
Its the only way to peace..
I have lost myself,
In protrudin pain,
Tryin hard to escape,
From this endless rowdy maze,
I have lost myself,
Now im cryin out loud,
I have lost myself,
Lost myself..
it happens a lot..like when one vasanth is called for 4 of em stand up confused to who they r referrin to..its completely irritatin if u see it from my perspective..boo hoo...anyways i always try to stay the best n the wackiest of em all...VASANTH..i love u!!.. [:P]..1000 lai oru vasanth paathurukken..ok..100 lai oru vasanth na kooda ok..but rite now..im 1 in 4 ppl!!..like im ONE-QUARTER !!..boo hoo again.. :(
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8 comments:
a couple of misplaced words here and there, but otherwise nice work!
Try writing bigger lines i dunno they seem to short.
Stuff u might wanna look into
A monster in THE mourning ? extra article :P
crap misery....make no sense...so try finding better words :)
i dont know what u mean by looming here, usage seems very dubious...look into that as well :)
Keep writing
cheers
Shrey
:P..i guess i actually write poems were i imagine that these words mean this n that..but this one was sorta made up..i tried hard to find rhymin words..thats y it sounds kinds u kno..WEIRD :D
shreys the expert critic..im jus the reader...ur style is one in a million alrite!!!
:P
erm..U culd very well write on something other than Coll and Frustration..
Neways nice work :)
hmmm enalamo panra kallaku po
-"B"ig "B".v.g
enalamo panra kallaku po ,nalla kalaichurukka ana wanna hear more from u
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