Friday, February 9, 2007

Swollen Mind..

So..i came up wit this thing when i was thinkin..yeah the very basic stupid thing which all humans do..if only we didn have the ability to think..man no Einstein,no Newton,no SHARAN[:P],no Eletricity,no crap OPTICS in physics..but still the human mind is the most complicated thing that can ever be..so i thought why ot write sumthin abt it..
P.S:Ideal for No-Brainers too(includin me!!)

Swollen mind,
Doesnt feel so fine,
Hasnt got no break,
It aint a piece of cake..

Swollen mind,
Workin all the time,
Stuck up in a place,
No light,no escape..

Swollen mind,
Knows how to lie,
It goes left and right,
Mumbled maze,all fake..

Swollen mind,
Aint got no life,
Trapped in my head,
For a cursed shed..

Swollen mind,
No place to hide,
Work all day,
Work all night..

Swollen mind,
Every chance to shine,
The mute hero inside,
Freak Einstein's mind..

Swollen mind,
Cries out and whines,
But deaf to the one,
Who cares least now..

Swollen mind,
I wish,i pray,
If at all one day,
You turn me insane,
Then swollen mind,
Its time for you,
To Rest In Peace,
Always in my mind..


hmmm...i know its kinda not too impressive. cos i tried to write this poem..its actually like this..i had the word swollen mind stuck up in my head..i didn kno wat i had to do..so i sat down n tried hard for thie poem to come out..goes to show that if u sit n try to create poerty it doesn come..write poems only when it comes straight from the heart..adieu

4 comments:

Ryan said...

last para super!!!!you thot over it??it wont come!!!..atleast not for us...
wrt 'no sharan'....no comments!!

Vasanth viswanathan said...

hmmm...hey but seriously..u r the big brains in the whole gang dude..dats y!! :P

Nithya said...

".man no Einstein,no Newton,no SHARAN[:P],no Eletricity,no crap OPTICS"

Lol..Well said :P

And yeah good thot and good title..Lines culdve been a l'il longer :) (No offence meant :D)

Unknown said...

..geez .. swollen mind..
..ryms a bit.
.
but nha ...i ain getting the feel

not ur best

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