YA..Coimbatore is simply awesome,.its climate unbelievable...burnin hot in the noon..but contrastingly pleasin in the evenin..i love the rain..its been on for the past three days..im LOVIN it..totally..so i was sittin wit my patti today not knowin wat to do..there was no power..so i was a sittin duck n had nothin to do..but then suddenly poetry OVERFLOWED..[:P] lol...
These days never promised hope,
My life,a long winding rope,
I look up at the skies,
Only dark clouds shadow the light..
And i wish for it all change,
To end all sorrow thats decayed,
I look out far and wide,
The lightning flashes in my eyes..
Right then,i saw a ray of hope,
That pierced my eye with a brilliant stroke,
She walked before my shallow eyes,
And brought a smile to my dark nights..
When i used to sit and cry,
All the pain that lurked inside,
I tried hard but i could not swipe,
The tears that crept from my eyes..
She wiped it all away alright,
All the pain and sorrow from my life,
She worked like wonder,like the magical rain,
That pours down from the dark skies..
She brings the love back into my life,
She takes her time and shows me whats right,
She is there for me yeah,by my side,
Like the pouring rain from the dark skies,
To wash away the tears from my eyes...
This poem is dedicated to the love of my life,,MY PATTI.....
love u a lot granny..
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3 comments:
pattis rock da..always....
and yea luv rain too!!
gr8 poem...coincidental coz i too wrote one on rain a few days bak...
Enna ellarum orey 'Rain' mazhai a irukku :P :P
U culd've included ur 'cute' grandmom's pic too :)..Aana vendam kannu patudum :P
dei...... podhum da..... thaangalai....
but i feel this is better than some of ur earlier ones...
Nillu, TKS kitta sollaren........
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